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...moshi...

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hommage à aletsuki sama:

聞こえたら
もし子守唄
もし月が
現れたらも
君を見ようか。

kikoetara
moshi komoriuta
moshi tsuki ga
arawaretara mo
kimi wo miyou ka.

if that lullaby was heard, and moon peeped through, would I see your face?

no more than a try in tanka domain these five lines, whose correct nihongo, thanks to my Sensei, is:

「もしあの子守唄が聞こえたら、
そして月が雲間から顔をのぞかせたら、
僕は君の顔を見るだろうに。」

(moshi ano komoriuta ga kikoetara,
soshite tsuki ga kumoma kara kao wo nozokasetara,
boku ha kimi no kao wo mirudarou ni?)

Current Music: pete seeger,"hobo's lullaby"
Comments

thanks indeed, fifi sama, too kind of you...
mais tu exagères toujours, ce n'est rien que
des exercices d'un très mauvais étudiant.