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yorukamome [userpic]
"beach haiku" ・「海辺俳句」

I've been very silent, I know - well, I'm going to have lots to post and say (hopefully, new works as well) and autumn is
probably the rightest time to...for now, here you are some 「海辺俳句」, "beach haiku": the first one, after the kindest
gift of an excellent green tea coming from the hands of the even more excellent sakuo sensei:

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「kuchibiru ya ・ tsukiyo ni amaki ・ tomo no o cha」
my friend’s tea, sweet to my mouth under this moonlight 

as for the other ones, well...I don't know exactly the reason for I wrote them in such a mood - maybe the simple summer ending, maybe
my new way of life begins to show its effects on my mind and soul - who can say?, I myself am still mumbleing about!...anyway, voilà:

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「natsu no gogo ・ nusunda ai no ・ kangae wa」
summer afternoon - a thought of stolen love

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「koi no yume ・ hitotsu ga owaru ・ natsu yogoto」
every summer night, a dream of love gets to its end.

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「natsu yoru no ・ saigo no hikari ・ iso niou」
...a summer night’s salt-scented last light...


「natsu hikari ・ warai no toki ni ・ toshi o totte」
summer light, gets older in the time of a smile.

obviously (as usual) my nihongo needed billions corrections and re-writings, so thanks once again to sakuo sensei for his sudden
and extremely kind help...anyway, this is how I felt to express myself and my world along these strange, lazy, thoughtful summer
days - this time, more than ever, your comments are absolutely, needingly, deepfriendly welcome.


i tuoi haiku sono uno piu bello dell'altro...davvero...pazzesco...

troppo buona, fifinette...li scriverò, anche, ma l'estate
spesso non lascia tempo all' "ARTE"...troppo mare, ne!

non sono io troppo buono, sei tu troppo dotato :-P e smettila di bagnarti invece di scrivere haiku!))) ti scioglierai in aqua!))