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yorukamome
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yorukamome [userpic]
我が春

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待って、や待って、
本当に我が
春を待って。

matte, ya matte,
hontou ni waga
haru o matte.

waiting and waiting...truth is, waiting for my own spring.

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I'm sure that my japanese version is once again horridly built on grammar
mistakes - but I'm sure as well that I'll be forgiven in advance by all of
you, as this is what I feel like, and no more words were found to say this
mood with such (for once, at least) a sharp and winged simpleness.

Current Music: puccini, "nessun dorma"
Comments
well understanable

This is true poem.Kamome san.
I can understand what you wish to say.
There is no prombem in Japanese grammer.
My beliving is that short poem as like haiku
finally get same form, because cry of human mind
is common through various langages.

素晴らしいですね!
subarasii desu ne!

sakuo.

I am deeply honoured by such words and comment:
賛辞をどうも有り難うございました、先生。 御世話様、毎日、
私の日本語は成長します、句の実際もより良くに成っています。
はい、そのように思います、句の形は宇宙の感情を見分ける
ことが出来る。

かもめ