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yorukamome [userpic]
the pinetree

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silvery moondrops
that pinewood drinking its silk
fresh rain from your lips

(no more than an unpretending try in english, I can't know how good...mais c'est un "hommage à")

Current Music: puccini, LA BOHÈME, "che gelida manina"
Comments

Fantastic photo, Kamome sama! You are quite a photographer, indeed :-)What kind of a tree is it?

You ku is very poetic :-) This is my response:

peak of summer --
the intense moonlight paints
disheveled boughs

:-)

thanks, but although I sometimes happen to take one or two good photographs, this one's not mine...and it's an olive, not a pine tree: I liked so much the image, and I'm enjoying your one as well!...always a great pleasure to host your comments and Words, origa sama.

hommage a qui???

la photo est exellente, mais ce haiku me semble un peu.. heum... pas trop un haiku. un peu trop de metaphore je crois. IMHO.

te reponds plus tard (a ton mail), je viens de rentree (suis allee en banlieue) et me sens epuisee...

kisses
v.

"IMHO", eh?...qui est-ce, enfin, le plus "faux-modeste"? lol ;)
mais je suis d'accord enfin , et je l'ai dit, il y a des fois
que je me laisse trop "prendre la main" - et en anglais, voyons,
rien plus qu'un essai peu réussi, le nihongo c'est mieux.

(ps: "hommage à qui?"...oh oh, quelle question "délicate", ne!...)

this is ... surreal!
gorgeous!

yes...I too LOVE LOTS this shot!