yorukamome ([info]yorukamome) wrote,
@ 2008-02-17 19:06:00
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...I'm sorry for deleting all your kindest previous replies and comments to this entry: I just realized how these two things were
born like twins, in my mind, to be seen/read in sequence and maybe compared in their peculiar "growth-through-movement"...
I moved therefore the whole previous one to its original place, in order to create the right sequence with its naturally related
"following step":


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たんぽぽは
私の夢の
翼哉

「tanpopo ha ・ watashi no yume no ・ tsubasa kana」

dandelion, amazing wings to my dreams


yes, something springy: dandelions are fully flowering at my door, they don't matter the coldest wind - they only
know the cleanest sunlight we're having since a whole week, and their bright yellow seems to invite Spring to hurry
towards me, and me to hurry towards Her...so, a little haiku was suddenly born - oh, I also need to thank by deepest
heart the unknown author of this splendid photograph, such a lucky web "trouvaille", which I'd be totally glad to gift
Him/Her back now - and pleased even more if He/She liked my presumptuous "additions"...


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...and more - more and more springy, although my mood isn't still all that breezy...


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枝踊り
その影壁で
春風に

「eda odori ・ sono kage kabe de ・ harukaze ni」

dance of a branch, its shade on a wall through the spring breeze


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[info]andreochka
2008-02-17 06:32 pm UTC (link)
Un haiku BELLSSSIMO! E il photo-haiga è assolutamente stupendo... delicatissimo!

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typo!
[info]andreochka
2008-02-17 06:34 pm UTC (link)
...ehm, volevo dire "bellissimo"...

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Re: typo!
[info]yorukamome
2008-02-17 06:54 pm UTC (link)
grazie...e una di queste volte qualcuno mi AGGREDIRA'
per via delle foto PRESE E RIFATTE dal web - oh, però,
non possono poi lamentarcisi tanto, i risultati mi
sembrano almeno decenti...NE?
(^_°)

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[info]b_oki
2008-02-17 07:04 pm UTC (link)
wow! another great photo you have found!

what treats, gabbiano - this beautiful combination with your beautiful, dancing calligraphy and lovely haiku.

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[info]yorukamome
2008-02-17 09:22 pm UTC (link)
well, bette dear...after posting these two latest, I scrolled back my LJ
(rarely done before) and LAZYed around, watching reading valueing all my
previous similar things - ugh!, HOW they look far and childish today!...
I realized I wasn't enjoying anything but (sometimes) my Words, still
seeming to be the only worthy part of all that PSEUDO-PICTORIAL RUBBISH:
I suppose this growth to be the most important thing I owe to you all,
for your interaction and presence sounds to my mind and heart the REAL
reason for I NAG myself over and over to do better and better - GRAZIE!

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[info]wicapis
2008-02-17 07:38 pm UTC (link)
did YOU write this on the wall? lol! Just kidding. This one is truly stunning and very orignal.

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[info]yorukamome
2008-02-17 09:25 pm UTC (link)
naaah...the wall is not mine, LOL! thanks for the kind
comment - and for your PRECIOUS PRESENCE: it's weeks that
your "political fervor" doesn't allow us to speak to you
nor to reply, GRUNT!...what's on with ya, ole Ma'am?
(°O^)

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[info]wicapis
2008-02-18 03:06 am UTC (link)
what's on with ya, ole Ma'am?
(°O^)

that's what that is happenin to me, gettin old and grumpy. ihihih!

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[info]yorukamome
2008-02-18 06:05 pm UTC (link)
"getting old" YOU?!? oh, don't tease me! GRUMPY, sure,
LOL!...naaah naaah, I think instead that you're allowing
TOO MUCH the election's climate invade your life...be
quite sure, SOCIAL LIFE WILL NEVER AGREE WITH OUR INNER
WORLD, wic - we'd better improve more and more by the
days our skills to preserve and keep on OUR PERSONAL
water-clear HEARTLAND...and please realize it's anyway
a man strongly involved in social and politics who's
suggesting this - do you remember the all-japanese
attitude of keeping always ready "THE SHELTER OF OUR
EIGHT-PAPERWALLS ROOM"...?

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[info]wicapis
2008-02-19 02:08 am UTC (link)
do you remember the all-japanese
attitude of keeping always ready "THE SHELTER OF OUR
EIGHT-PAPERWALLS ROOM"...?

hmm. Interesting concept. Please explain further. I have never heard of it but you've piqued my interest.

and yes, I am a little too obsessed with the politics as of late. Can't help it, it all looks promising for a better America. After Bush I think anything is better. lol lol lol lol lol lol lol

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[info]yorukamome
2008-02-19 09:51 am UTC (link)
oh well, this is totally UNDOUBTABLE...ne! please have a look at the personal mail I'm sending you... LOLOL! (^_^)

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:-(
[info]wicapis
2008-02-19 03:17 pm UTC (link)
gabbi,

as U know...I could not open the file. Please post it here. I am curious.

Looks like you are so chipper this evening, I'd like to join in the laughter.

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Re: :-(
[info]yorukamome
2008-02-19 07:23 pm UTC (link)
oh, GRUMPHT!...why don't you allow replies on your posts?
putting it there would be a VALID SUPPORT to your CRUSADE!
(^_^)
...anyway, here you are:

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[info]wicapis
2008-02-20 12:54 am UTC (link)
R O F T L!!! Yipee!!! Ain't that the darn truth! Thank YOU.

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Re: :-(
[info]yorukamome
2008-02-20 08:18 pm UTC (link)
DAMN' again, wic - would you mind tellin' me
WHY THE HECK you don't allow replies?!? your
latest post is very nice, but it's impossible
to type there...what's this, sort of some new
LOCKED-DOORS-RELIGION?!?

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Re: :-(
[info]wicapis
2008-02-20 11:32 pm UTC (link)
okay I will open it, but which one?

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Re: :-(
[info]yorukamome
2008-02-21 04:14 pm UTC (link)
no matter WHICH ONE, wic...and I realize now how I need to apologize
for my hyperunkind "over-the-line" reaction - I should have learned
to respect more than all Persons' privacy and choices - but I can as
well say that it is worrying and upsetting not to be able to speak and
communicate: after all, this is our "PUBLIC MEETING SQUARE", and just
like in ancient Greece's times such an OPEN FIELD is dedicated to friends'
sharing and comparing ideas/moods/feelings and so on...am I all that wrong?

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Re: :-(
[info]wicapis
2008-02-21 05:02 pm UTC (link)
No YOU are not wrong at all, Gabbi. It is open now for open discussion come and join in. Okay I will open the moon post too for you. Share your first experience with us when U first watched the total eclipse, and at what age...I'd like to know.

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Re: :-(
[info]yorukamome
2008-02-21 09:44 pm UTC (link)
as soon as I'm back to PC I will, wic - off to
a friend's birthday party now, and still I'm
wearing my japanese clothes (some training
at home, LOL!)...

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Re: :-(
[info]wicapis
2008-02-21 05:17 pm UTC (link)
Senator Gabbi

where are YOU? since we are speaking of Greece...

I was touched by your suggestion to open my post, I am not angry with you, actually quite charmed by your proposal. As U know I have been glued to the TV watching our Senators having debates and rallies and I felt I could not give people time by responding per chance they responded to my post.


comprendo, Senor? and U should know me by now, I love to joke around dear.

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Re: :-(
[info]yorukamome
2008-02-21 09:46 pm UTC (link)
I understand, Ma'am...also that you must have been
SERIOUSLY confused by that stuff, ne: "senator" me?!?
ugh, NEVER!!! JAMAIS DE MA VIE!!! MAI!!!

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[info]la_tisana
2008-02-17 07:41 pm UTC (link)
ma che SUPER bellezza...sei stradotato dal Buondio, tu!

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[info]yorukamome
2008-02-17 09:29 pm UTC (link)
...ma io non faccio altro che cucire insieme dei pezzi: quelli
che trovo, e qualche STRACCETTO mio - e riesco soltanto a fare
dei vestiti da Arlecchino...GRAZIE lo stesso, però: se non fosse
per il vostro supporto, avrei già chiuso da tempo la SARTORIA!
(°~°)

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[info]a__ya
2008-02-17 09:53 pm UTC (link)
VERY NICE! :)

my lovely shadows ))

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[info]yorukamome
2008-02-17 09:57 pm UTC (link)
your "shadows" go'round with many more wings than mine,
allina dear!...I'd like to ask you for the permission to
use (but NOT UNNAMED, and respecting your © copyright!)
one or two of your pics...may I?

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[info]a__ya
2008-02-17 10:14 pm UTC (link)
oh, dear! you may use them all :))
d'you need the bigger versions of pictures? I'll send you if you wish (the quality isn't the best - too big ISO). just say me wich of them.

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[info]yorukamome
2008-02-17 10:21 pm UTC (link)
yes, if my funny head comes out with THE RIGHT WORDS I'm
mumbleing around, I'd like to have those ones with your
children feeding birds, and one "Xmas firey", but not
looking too much "Xmas'"...(^_~)...I'd say some orange/
sepia warmth!

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[info]a__ya
2008-02-17 10:28 pm UTC (link)
hmm... let's do such way:
every preview in my post is a link - you may click on each one which you need and write me (an anonimous, of course) comment THERE, in the photoalbum where they're located. then I'll know exactly what you need. ok?:)

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[info]a__ya
2008-02-17 10:48 pm UTC (link)
or you may look here http://www.liveinternet.ru/photoalbumshow.php?albumid=530375&seriesid=943599
and name me the numbers

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[info]yorukamome
2008-02-18 09:42 pm UTC (link)
ok...well, I'd say the # 7 and 14 of "bird sequence"
are the most suitable - am I allowed to make some
small changes to the pics?

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[info]a__ya
2008-02-19 08:09 am UTC (link)
14? are you sure? )
ok ) I'll send you the originals - you can change them as you wish )
if you need any other photo - you're welcome, as well :)

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[info]asakiyume
2008-02-17 10:27 pm UTC (link)
Lovely--shadows can be so beautiful. Nice that you have harukaze!

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[info]yorukamome
2008-02-17 10:32 pm UTC (link)
oh well...it wasn't all that BREEZY lately, NE!
we're experiencing one more COLDEST pre-spring
time this year...but by the times the kami of
weather gets a pause, and it's all a glory of
sun and nature...

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[info]cranehaven
2008-02-18 06:52 pm UTC (link)
WOW!!!! JUST WOW!!!!

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[info]yorukamome
2008-02-18 09:05 pm UTC (link)
oh well...such an enthhusiastic comment coming
by SUCH a measured aesthete is FAR more than a
simple compliment - and this obliges me never
to be "less than that"...sure, Choshi 様, you
know well how to PUSH AND NAG your "patients"!
(^_^)

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[info]cranehaven
2008-02-18 11:25 pm UTC (link)
.....Hah!!! Such is the "way"

~P

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[info]le_aucoeur
2008-02-21 06:47 pm UTC (link)
exquisite paradox, my friend: delicate and refined, yet bold and brashly assertive brush strokes, the play of color, shadowy, yet subtle direct light.
these images, words speak to my own paradoxical fragility and toughness. in my view, art is successful when it touches the human heart and mind, almost seeing into one with a message to impart.
well done, my well loved friend. my dreams will borrow your wings. :]

c

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[info]yorukamome
2008-02-21 09:42 pm UTC (link)
totally glad to lend you my poor wings, Doc!...you
know that "the colourful part" of these works aren't
mine tho - I was very lucky to find these SPLENDID
backgrounds to my little Words, unlucky as they were
brushed with such a rough and coarse hand...!

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[info]sakuo3903
2008-02-24 07:36 am UTC (link)
Oh wonderful poem series!
Your spring mind is well appealing to my mind.
The combination of picture and Shyo are pretty good.
I wish to give you 100 points, but there is only one
minus that is in last Shyodou.

The second line,,,
その影 is correct but you wrote みの影。
Please correct it, soon is better.
Forgive me to point out a little thing.

sakuo.

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[info]yorukamome
2008-02-24 05:46 pm UTC (link)
oh, you're the most welcome, sakuo sensei!...thanks LOTS for the
observation, I hadn't realized my mistake - and, more than that,
I gifted that page, so that for my first time I had to correct
on a digital image because I couldn't do it on the original:
anyway, it seems to me that the image is still readable enough
and not all that bad...thanks as well for the TOO KIND NOTE,
"100 POINTS"....WOW! you make me feel a good student, ne!
お世話に成りました、大層有難い、

夜かもめ・鴎庵

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100% recovery
[info]sakuo3903
2008-02-25 05:05 am UTC (link)
You are very good skill man.
Your そ is 100% recovered.
I can not find any difference between old and new performance.
If I will make same mistake, I will aske you reform
it by internet course.

sakuo.

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Re: 100% recovery
[info]yorukamome
2008-02-25 07:44 pm UTC (link)
sensei, you know I'm far better WITH HANDS than WITH PC KEYS!
(^_^)
it is a luck that 「そ」 and 「み」are so similar, which allowed
me an easier correction...sincerely, I don't feel as skilled as
to promise - it would be a hard task do the same "restore action"
in some more serious work! but if sakuo sensei ever needed such
an intervention, well...I will try anyway!
(*_*)

夜かもめ・鴎庵

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Re: 100% recovery
(Anonymous)
2008-02-26 01:43 am UTC (link)
Thank you for your acceptance of remaking letter.
I feel safety as to drawing letter.

sakuo.

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[info]yullyanka
2008-03-30 09:51 am UTC (link)
La fille charmante, et les photos tels volants, mais ce fond orange pour moi tel lourd, anxieux...

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[info]yorukamome
2008-03-30 01:56 pm UTC (link)
ben, merci, yulya, mais...il n'y a RIEN d'orange, ici!

...???...???...

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[info]yorukamome
2008-03-30 02:00 pm UTC (link)
aaaah...je comprends maintenant, tu veux dire
l'EDIT de la page LJ elle-même!...oui, je suis
totalement d'accord, mais suite aux nouveaux
SETTINGS il y avait seulement celle-ci d'une
seule couleur, et pas trop "bruyant" d'0bjets
et images variées...un vrai dommage!

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